I awoke at midnight…
no one to tell.
Then thoughts found feelings…
as my conscience dwelled.
There deep in my eyes…
two tears did swell.
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so looking to the sky ¡ sing and from my heart to YOU ¡ bring…
I don’t know whether to laugh or cry, thank you for the journey. 🙂
You can do both 😁 your welcome and thank you for checking it out.
you are welcome… but on the train not the WC. :))
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I just got the joke 😂😁
not to worry, when I first learned English I had no idea what you would do in a water closet . why would anyone keep water in a closet? :))
Haha I feel you… we don’t say “water closet” here in the United States. I think that’s a European thing maybe 😁
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There’s SO much emotion in this my friend. Love it. ❤️😊
Yeah, it’s a lil different for me. Thank you 😊
Did it feel different because it sounded powerful!
Not really… just isn’t something i post often and I really don’t do many poems. They are few and far between
Nice
Thank you : )
This was a really enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing. I’d love for you to check out my latest work at https://open.substack.com/pub/lucazaniwriting/p/cheating-death-wide-awake-in-naples?r=8m36yy&utm_campaign=post-expanded-share&utm_medium=post%20viewer, if you’re interested – i appreciate any feedback. Keep up the great work!
Thank you brother… I appreciate that. As I have some time later I will check out your link. Thanks again.
I don’t really do substack but I’ve checked your blog out here on WP… good stuff bro. 😎
That song had some real depth. Well done!
Thank you brother, i appreciate that. 😎
I like the instrumental, an emotive song. Well done!
Thank you Fleur. 😎
You’re welcome 😊
loia! Ur profile is so beautiful! I’m new here, how did u do that?
Thank you Swarnali and welcome to WordPress. How did I do what exactly?
Ur menu design! It’s all blue, my favourite colour! I’m not able to change my colour. Although I figured out to change the theme, but most of them r paid. Did u buy the theme? Or u personally customised it? I’m still exploring this site actually… And ur lyrics r nice…
Oh ok yeah 😁 my theme I’m using is called “twenty seventeen” and it’s a free one and I was able to customize the colors and add my header image in the background at the top. I’m still learning everything, it gets a little complicated and thank you about the lyrics…
Twenty seventeen! I’ll remember it… Inspired by u I also found a theme. But the thing is when I share my blogs through whatsapp, and they (my classmates) try to open the link through chrome, they r not able to see the theme, instead they just see the font changes that came with the theme!… I don’t know what’s wrong… Things get complicated sometimes…🥲
Yes I feel you… I’ve tried a few different themes before settling on the one I have now. It seems each one has different issues lol. Good luck, I hope you find one that suits you.
Thanks! Working hard! 💪
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Interesting post.
GJ Mann
website: gjmann.org
Thank you.
I might not understand everything, but I love listening—so much feeling in this song, absolutely beautiful!
Sorry for the late reply. I just found your comment. Thank you very much. I’m so glad you felt it.